Friday 12 June 2020

my creative writing


this is the link.

This term we have been working on creative writing. It was very fun.

My story is about a game of soccer that plays on a tall mountain that is off, as in tilted off.

We had to choose from about five photos. It was a bit hard because I could not think properly at that time.

It was also very hard to think of what to type but eventually I thought of something to write.

I would be scared if I played on that place.

3 comments:

  1. Kia ora. I am Joshua from St Mary’s School.
    I really liked your description.
    I learnt that you're doing creative writing.
    Maybe you could describe a bit more.
    Please visit my blog
    here

    Mā te wā
    Joshua

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  2. very well done I love the picture and all the information you've intended. next time you could put a bit more description in, but other than that I I really like it. keep up the good work I'd love to see more

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  3. Hi Austin. I am Casper form Ahipara school. I really like what you created and it looks so cool. Keep up the good work and blog ya later.

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